Uss raat .....

[Madu]

Uss raat bohat weerani thi
jis raat wo tahna soi thi
uss shaam bohat udasi thi
jis shaam wo tanha roi thi
ik dukh tha uss kay chehray par
ik dard tha uss ki aankhon main
jab khali bartan khankay thay
jab jata cholha sookha tha

uss raat bohat weerani thi
uss shaam bohat udasi thi

phir khali ghar bhi toot gaya
aur aankh ka ansoo rooth gaya
jo manzil ko jata tha, wo rasta dhundh main doob gaya
har aas umeed bhi tooti thi
sab dunia uss say roothi thi
jis shaam wo tanha roi thi
jis raat wo tanha soi thi


(Madiha)

[Huma]

uss shaam bohat udasi thi
jis shaam wo tanha roi thi



so sad yaar

[Zenab Muhammad]

wow mady :)

dont make me cry baby, main abhi ro k hw aye hoon :cray:

[Madu]

Thanxxxxxxxxx Huma n Zenab ........ main nay ap logon ko sad aur rula dia kisi shayar k liay iss say barhay aizaaz ki baat aur kia ho sakti hai ....... :D

[Huma]

oh ap to shaayer ho gayee phir

[Madu]

ho nai gaeeeeeeeeeeeeee ........ main honnnnnnnn pehlay saayyyyyy :redface:

[Zenab Muhammad]

hahha ya thts nice madu

but kal us waqt main waise he roye thi aur jab apki poem parhi tuo...:( well kal main is liyee roye cz perleen is out the race of indian idol :( . anyway. nice one madu

[Madu]

tasleemaaat aamir bhai .....

[Silver_Knife]

Moved....

[Wahab]

bohut khooob .... bohut zada achi .... bohut udasee hai iss main
madiha bohut acha likha hai aap ney .. bohut zada ...... issi tarah likhti rehyeh

[Madu]

shukran ya saeedii :hi:

[Asma.Mir]

Kya baat hai yaar... i dun know whats behind it but for me its enuff that it brought tears to my eyes... and people say i look like Garfield when i cry :-( so ... signing off...

Well done Madu jee.. chaa chuu gayi hain aap ...

[Madu]

Thanksssssssss Asma :) ... baqqi poems parheen ap nay meri ???

[Asma.Mir]

Nahi Madu ji... baaqi poems tow nahi parh saki.. aj kal ABSENTEEISM bohat barh gaya hai mera HB sey ... :-( magar abb zarur parhun gee ...dun u worry sweet heart ;-P